EXT / INT. / Out side of prison (Main square)/Prison ( Jail cell )
Ali waiting for Mario to be released out of prison outside the main square.
Mario comes out of prison with a black bag in his hand . he looks around and walks towards Ali's car .
Ali : Yo Mario ! long time no see man .
Mario : Ali man how is it going ? .
Ali : I am good man i have done a lot since you
have gone man .
Ali : how was the tuff four years man ? .
Mario : Very tuff man i got attacked twice .
Ali pulls out and drives off to his house .
Good first scene, but resist the urge to write any dialogue until you have planned out all the scenes. It will prevent you from keeping a bad scene in because you like one of the lines in it.
ReplyDeleteWell worked and some nice moments in the scene you have written.